Welcome to 2019 !!!

am happy in my new classroom and my teacher so nice. And sometimes my teacher  helps me too.  At lunch sometimes I play soccer.  In Year 5 my old teacher helped me too. And in the  holidays I went to Auckland with my Dad and my Mum.  We went to the beach.

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  1. Hi, my name is Carlos I go to Paroa School.This is a really good piece of writing. Next time go back and read it so there are no mistakes.The things i like about this piece of writing is how you expand why you liked you teacher.

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